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Why do you tease me so?
The fault is mine not yours
You don't know what's going on so
how I can say you're teasing me?
This problem is mine and mine alone
All I can do is watch
I fear my own words
What, what can I say?
I feel compelled to say so much but what?
What would you say back?
You can't understand how I feel about it
I can't explain it myself
I'll just bury it in the back of my mind
And keep my silence
I feel so much due to your release
The sweet sound piercing the air and blessing my ears
It caresses my soul with so little effort
All you have to do is made that sound
And I am awakened
For a second there is excitement, delight
As much as I try the feeling remains
What is this not poison to me?
Why does the aroma not sting my senses?
The smell by all rights should tear my olfactory organ apart
But I feel nothing but completion
Why?
I can't even watch for long
I don't wish to convey the wrong message
Two seconds can be so long
If only I knew what meaning to express or what words to say
I am not brave enough
The regret will hit me later
I know it's wrong, that I shouldn't like these stimuli
But every fiber of my spirit embraces this head-long
I will allow this part of you to wash over me
With this scent you own me miss
May I be free someday to be blessed in actuality
Till then I am a prisoner of my own silence
And these chains may not be undone
I take consolence that you are at least liberated
Enjoy your freedom
I accept my fate
Eternal silence
Have fun
I admit I didn't know how to classify this lacking experience writing poetry and such. I tend to be most poetic when I'm not awake, lol. Also for once I broke out of writer's block land in a good while.

Look forward to comments

Thanks in advance
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da-fLy Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010
this has been featured on encyclopędia dramatica.
if ę features me, GOOD! i don't give a damn, because all they're doing is giving me more views and recognition.
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Troller-Coaster Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
Ugh. What the fuck?!
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magicalme007 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=.= it's poetry - haven't you ever seen some?
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Troller-Coaster Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
Yes... but it didn't have to do with inhaling farts.. which is quite crude to me. BUT EVARYONE HAS THAR OWN PINIONS.
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magicalme007 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
>=/ you do not have to be rude - have some consideration for others!
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Troller-Coaster Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
Does not compute.
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magicalme007 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=.=; you truly are hopeless aren't you?
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Troller-Coaster Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009
Indeed.
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magicalme007 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconfacepalmplz:
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